Comments on: Dinner at Gourlay’s http://dalefiction.dale.emery.name/2008/04/gourlays/ dale.emery defeats his muse Fri, 11 Jun 2010 23:28:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Dale http://dalefiction.dale.emery.name/2008/04/gourlays/#comment-78 Dale Sat, 26 Apr 2008 18:35:08 +0000 http://dalefiction.dale.emery.name/2008/04/gourlays/#comment-78 As far as I can tell, that's the whole thing. I think it stands on its own, but the ending is a bit preachy. I suppose it could develop (or I could develop it) into something more, but for now that's the whole story. As far as I can tell, that’s the whole thing. I think it stands on its own, but the ending is a bit preachy.

I suppose it could develop (or I could develop it) into something more, but for now that’s the whole story.

]]> By: Doyle Sinclair http://dalefiction.dale.emery.name/2008/04/gourlays/#comment-77 Doyle Sinclair Sat, 26 Apr 2008 18:23:36 +0000 http://dalefiction.dale.emery.name/2008/04/gourlays/#comment-77 Great scene. I thought the dialogue would be a little more oblique, or hidden-agenda, but, I liked it, very much. Is this part of a work, or just an exercise in writing dialogue? If the former, I'd love to read more. Great scene. I thought the dialogue would be a little more oblique, or hidden-agenda, but, I liked it, very much.
Is this part of a work, or just an exercise in writing dialogue?

If the former, I’d love to read more.

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